IrregularCharlie's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Little Red Riding Hoody]

Action Scripting good, the rest, not so good

You obiviously got the grips of action scripting and I can see you mean to tell a good (if angsty) story with this. But frankly the art style was lacking, there wasn't any animation and the music is the same bull you hear in every "deep" game.
My suggestion is too continue working with flash fleshing out your skills before attempting to continue this.
Now this isn't me telling you to give up. Just keep practising. :P

MickyMcIntee responds:

I fully agree with you, I do have a firm knowledge of actionscript. But my graphics needs a bit of work. And I'll keep at it! :) On another note, it's not actually meant to be a 'deep' game. It's supposed to be a 'Oh god you ruined my life, ohwell I'm dead now time for you to die in a series of set-ups:-]' Kinda game. Thanks for the input! :)

[Mother's Day Card 2]

Very thoughtfull but...

...this just isn't made for newgrounds.

Shitassm responds:

its flash so it is for newgrounds. i dont think there is a written rule on whats for newgrounds and what is not. its a matter of opinion and its not relevant. im sick of hearing that.