Jesus my part looks out of date.
Still as always awesome work fellas.
Jesus my part looks out of date.
Still as always awesome work fellas.
Thank you!
1984
Big fan of the novel.
The attempt wasn't bad and the sound seem alright for me. My bigest issue is the art design. The "dead" looking colour I have no problem with and fits well to the feelings presented in the novel. It's just the structure of everything seems off. You know with buildings having little/no detail etc...
By all means this isn't a bad flash. I would just recomend working on your flash art ability and adding more fbf.
Lastly I realise this is for an english project and may less effort was put in (not a bad thing, I hardly do jackshit for school). 8D
hmm..
Well lets start with the bad and get it out the way. I've always had my mis-givings about sprites so that may have upset the score. I'm not sure why you wanted to submit an unfinished peice of animation but maybe it's for feedback.
And now the good parts. The animation was smooth and never seem jerky, this also applies to the sound effects which all seemed on point. THe use of changing camera anagles was also a nice touch but don't go over board, this ain't Batman Begins I still need to see whats happening. Still not bad, want to see this finished though. :D
You're half-right on the reason I posted this. It was partially out of boredom, but I did hope for feedback. I'll admit I went a little nuts on the camera stuff, but It's fun being able to alter perception a little, so I kind of made no effort to limit myself on it. Thanks for the feedback!
A not bad first attempt
Consdiering this was your first attempt, not bad.
The sound was synced up and art direction was kind cute in it's own way.
But it did seem alittle jumpy at parts, probally best to do some inbetween animation to prevent this. Also I had no idea what any of it meant but then again these things rarely need a point.
So yeah, keep it up. :P
i fucking love that Llama
I FUCKING LOVE THAT LLAMA!
And she loves you. :3
Sexy
Nothing has ever been sexier.
The sheeps...
...deh be gone.
As a semi-welsh man I am deeply upset by this issue. Thank you leafers for bring it too light.
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